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Death Note: Ryuk wordplay by ~laurifer:iconlaurifer:

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It's finally done! Full view is definitely recommended!

Well I had an inspiration from [link] ...Roomie has the most awesomest ideas evaaar. And so I decided to do something similar but mold it into recognizable things. This one is for Ryuk from Death Note...you can recognize his profile, yeah? :3 I think this would count as poetry since it sort of describes Ryuk and his characteristics and such.

This is my first time making something like this, so comments and critique is welcome...I want to know if it's worth trying again! :D

EDIT: I hate DA. Where'd all my comments go?!

Comments


:iconsakurazukimori:
~sakurazukimori Mar 17, 2007, 7:23:51 AM
that looks way cool. when you told me about it i dident think it would tern out like this! soo cool!!
:iconlaurifer:
~laurifer Mar 17, 2007, 10:05:48 AM
Muahaha! Don't underestimate me lol

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Because everyone needs a little lovin': [link]
:icongreen-haiku:
~green-haiku Mar 18, 2007, 8:51:32 AM
This is certainly really cool, I can see it too. :D

I do think you should have chosen a better choice of words, however. No mention of apples?! How could you? :XD:

--
There was a young man from Japan
Whose verses never would scan.
When they said this was so,
He said, "Yes, I know,
But I always try to get as many words in the last line
as I possibly can."
:iconlaurifer:
~laurifer Mar 18, 2007, 10:22:06 AM
...apples are there -_- next to rabu rabu lol. Yeah it was hard to come up with words since he's not a fave character of mine. And thanks for the fave! :hug:

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Because everyone needs a little lovin': [link]
:iconshiroikaze:
Mood: Love ~Shiroikaze Mar 18, 2007, 6:44:20 PM
that's so AWESOME. *________* [beams]

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xoxo
:iconlaurifer:
~laurifer Mar 18, 2007, 8:29:29 PM
Thank you! And thank you for the fave :hug:

--
Because everyone needs a little lovin': [link]
:icont00r:
Mood: Artistic ~t00r Mar 26, 2007, 3:08:07 AM
I hate to be illiterate, but what does the Japanese say?
:iconlaurifer:
~laurifer Mar 26, 2007, 8:30:23 AM
The kanji next to his mouth is death, the red says "rabu rabu" which is "love love", and the long chunk next to it says "My name is Ryuk" :D

--
Because everyone needs a little lovin': [link]
:iconmadeleine-da:
~Madeleine-dA Aug 22, 2007, 1:32:21 PM
Visual Poetry Deserves Your Love

--
I exist in a fantasy world.
Deny me if you can.
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